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MARCO CARACCIOLO, A Walk Through Deep History


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                David Bryant and colleagues shows. One way to thicken simulations
                is, therefore, to evoke characters’ embodied engagement with their
                surroundings, or to foreground their affective responses. Creative
                metaphorical language can also help flesh out simulations by captur-
                ing a character’s experience with more clarity and nuance than would
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                be possible through conventional, nonmetaphorical language. The
                tropes that punctuate Salopek’s account of walking are what I call
                ‘phenomenological’ metaphors and similes: they bring readers closer
                to the lived experience (or phenomenology) of a particular character—
                in this case, the storyteller’s. 18
                     Not all thickening strategies are character-directed, of course.
                We have seen that Salopek’s passage foregrounds (and thematizes)
                the iambic rhythm of “a holding on and le ing go”; along similar lines,
                style may also involve readers’ bodies by creating a certain kind of
                stylistic pa erning that they experience in sensory terms. Moreover,
                moving now to the macro-level of plot, the progression of narrative
                itself may take on quasi-rhythmic qualities. Cognitive linguist Michael
                Kimmel talks about the “affective contour” of narrative to refer to the





                16  David J. Bryant, Barbara Tversky, and Nancy Franklin, “Internal and Ex-
                ternal Spatial Frameworks for Representing Described Scenes,” Journal of
                Memory and Language 31, no. 1 (1992): 74-98.
                17  For more on this, see Marco Caracciolo, “Phenomenological Metaphors in
                Readers’ Engagement with Characters: The Case of Ian McEwan’s Saturday,”
                Language and Literature 22, no. 1 (2013): 60-76.
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                  A few more examples of phenomenological metaphors and similes from
                Salopek’s 2013 article (I’m italicizing the relevant portion of the quotation):
                “I awoke before dawn and saw snow: thick, dense, choking, blinding. Like
                plankton suspended at the bo om of a sunless sea, swirling white in the beam of
                my headlamp. It was the dust.” “We plod across an acacia plain darkened to
                the color of chocolate by the warm raindrops.” “The world changes when you
                are thirsty […] The desert tightens around you like a noose.” Note that I’m not
                making a distinction between metaphor and simile here, based on the as-
                sumption that both figures involve “cross-domain mapping,” or the compar-
                ison between different semantic domains; see Elena Semino and Gerard
                Steen, “Metaphor in Literature,” in The Cambridge Handbook of Metaphor and
                Thought, ed. Raymond W. Gibbs (Cambridge: Cambridge University Press,
                2008), 232-46.


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